Slide 1: not clear what your business concept is, re-write and be specific slide 2: ok slide 3: org chart has no head count--how many managers, coaches, staff? slide 4: no pitching machines? no budget for equipment installation? maintenance?
I'm not going to grade this one because I'm sure your revisions of these slides and the new marketing slide will result in a great grade.
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Slide 1: not clear what your business concept is, re-write and be specific
slide 2: ok
slide 3: org chart has no head count--how many managers, coaches, staff?
slide 4: no pitching machines? no budget for equipment installation? maintenance?
I'm not going to grade this one because I'm sure your revisions of these slides and the new marketing slide will result in a great grade.
This is just for pitchers. There will be no hitting involved.
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